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Old Thursday, March 16, 2017
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good going Bhutto. According to me, your outline is good. Try to add some examples to justify your argument, these examples can be from real life observation as well as history. You can put the examples under point number 3.

In point number 4, you can also add that, One should equip oneself of resources that will help in achieving particular goals.

In point number 5 discuss the consequences of ignoring 'today'. Such as, Not taking care of today will lead to a dismal tomorrow and a bleak future. You have just discussed the causes of ignoring today.

Inculcating examples to justify the statement will make your essay stronger.
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