Originally Posted by elect

Dear Seniors,
I am taking CE-2017 and wrote essay on "more and more international military engagements by the United Nations, Is the world moving towards peace". Below is my outline.

1. Introduction
2. Organizational Structure of the UN
a. Creation and members/size of the UN
b. Unbalanced power structure (members with VETO power)
c. Role of third world countries in the UN
3. Purpose of formation of the UN
a. Intended purpose of the UN
b. Role it is playing towards world peace
c. Role it can play for world peace
4. Military Engagements under the UN
a. Peace missions lead by the UN
i. Congo
ii. Bosnia
b. Role of Pakistan in Peace missions
c. Military Engagements by NATO/USA under the permission of UN
i. Vietnam
ii. Afghanistan
iii. Iraq
iv. Libya
5. Silence of the UN on Military Engagements of member nations on other countries/areas
a. Kashmir Issue
i. UN Resolution
ii. Practical Role of the UN
b. Israel/Palestine
i. israel expansion in Palestine Area
6. Assessment of the effectiveness of the UN for World Peace
a. Comparison of the role it can play and it is playing
7. Suggestion to make the UN effective in achieving peace in world
a. Stop backing military expeditions
b. Abolish concept of VETO Power
c. All the nations should have equal rights in UN
d. Enforce its resolutions
8. Conclusions

Please comment will it be enough to pass the essay paper.