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Quote:
Originally Posted by S R Bhutto View Post
Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself

Outline:

1. Introduction:

2. Importance of "Today"

3. Connection between today and tomorrow
- The type of seed we sow, today, will produce the same type of fruit tomorrow -

4. Methods to take care of "today" for a better "tomorrow"




a) Staying Optimistic
b) Setting realistic life goals
c) Honesty with one's own self is the best policy
d) Working tirelessly towards achieving goals
e) Positive attitude towards life

5. Consequences of ignoring "today" and worrying unrealistically about future

a) Wasting time and energy
b) Lethargic attitude
c) Wobbly goals
d) No self-control and engaging in useless activities

6) Conclusion


Please seniors, madaaad kardein koi plsss

Assess my essay outline....requestttiing you, all
Dear Bhutto
Your content of the essay seems to be too individualistic and moralistic. Intrpret the topic in broader perspective such as " Today" can be contemporary economic conditions, present political scenario etc " Tommorow" can be interpreted as future so you can say if today we choose a correct political path, i.e democracy, freedom of speech etc than future of country shall be bright. In this way you give example from past experience of other countries too.
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