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Originally Posted by Maddiha nasim View Post
Injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywher( Martin luther king)

Introduction:

1) what is Un?

2)proponent of peace, security and human rights all over the world

3)Declarations related to peace,security and humarights

3.1:

3.2

3.3

3.4

i dnt remember now

2:Military engagements

1) Afghanistan(since najib ullah's govt)

2)A road to iraq

3) Kashmir(touched history+ 2015 general assenmbly speech by Nawaz sharif n its response by the UN)



3:Biased attitude towards muslim countries leading toward misunderstandng of Islam .while :

1)islam:a religion of peace

2)relevant ahadiths and quranic verses

3) leopd weisse views( only one quotation

4) theory of end of histry (just theme)



4:other top failures by Un in maintaining peace..

1) use of veto power

2)

The cold war

3)Rawanda

4) Srilanka

5)Nuclear Proliferation

6)Terrorism

7)srebrenica massacre

8)khymer rouge(1975-1979)

9)Darfur

10)somalia

5) current condition of syria

6) quotation... i dnt remember now

7: what are the needed reforms

there were five points i dnt rem,ember yet

8) conclusion : i summed up by asking several questions as sir n kaha t jhanjhor dena hy... why what who ,how etc.... plus arrival of donald trump...nd the future of the world with strong influence of us on un...

it was about 3300 words essay full of quotations quranic verse ahadiths...like

Allah abhors those who disturb the peace of the world ( i wrote source as well ...now i forgot it)

Indeed,peace is the essential message of islam...

it was statistical as well....as un provided aid to Us in iraq of $8 billion ...un resolution,,kofi annan views and ameria self defence



i added a book name Tower of babbles...which was a defamation..as it was written dat only 77 countries hv democratic regimes among 193 members of Un... so in reforms i sugggested the improvement in this regard...

one reform was By us at one time...wen it decide to ...some kind...i dnt know now...resultanlty us won the elections or un ka wae status brqarar raha....iss trha s kuch tha...

plz evaluate my essay ...m worried about it


In the context of UN interventions, "is the world moving towards peace?" was the question asked. Nowhere have you answered this question in your write-up. Don't want to discourage you, but I think you should start preparing for the next attempt.
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