@ A Zee, Thank you very much for your detailed response. It is the feedback from you people that will help me improve.
Point 2, 3 and 4 are understandable, I will surely incorporate these suggestions in future attempts.
However, the first point is where I think I can defend myself. The arguments and end conclusion repeatedly stress on taking a breather. The passage does suggest where the energies of people should be spent, but it focuses more on "how" can people come to know the real problems that they are overlooking because of misplaced priorities. When we decipher the "how" part, it is taking a time out to get mental clarity.
So I think the title does justice to the passage.