Originally Posted by alihashmatkhoso

as so for you outline is concerned is impressive enough to insist checker to go through it with interest .
in my opinion ( its my opinion may be i am wrong ) there are some flaws in your essay. which are ..

firstly, where is major issuein your outline,which is still unsolved despite of many resolution (kashmir). it should be discussed in such type of essays.furthermore, UN has become spectator on the issue of terrorism.
secondly, in outline number 6 you missed two important reformation proposals given in past.

thirdly not only reformations but other steps should b included to ensure peace process, which are, implementation of education, economic , alleviating poverty and such other projects can play a vital role to ensure peace in the globe ..... stay blessed