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Originally Posted by Mohammed Uzair
I totally agree with you. The only reason why i discussed UN's organizational shortcomings and other issues, which though do not seem very relevant with the proposition, was because i believed it played a vital role in the failure of UN's Military engagements. Had UN not been facing these issues, it might have had experienced success vis-a-vis its military engagement. So, i tried to link organizational shortcomings/issues with the failure of its military engagement. Lets hope it works out.
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If you believed that the UN's organizational shortcomings were relevant to the failure of its military engagements, you should have made it readily apparent in your outline as well so that the examiner could also see the link between the two.
Best of luck!