Okay so you did not gave much of a thesis statement but you made your point clear. Anyways your main point looks relevant. I wanted to attempt this essay, but i could not comprehend the basic statement of essay - the word 'really' was creating confusion for me. Nonetheless i like your systematic approach. I admire trotsky59's perspective of feminism waves, these were excellent points. Did you discuss 3rd world feminism in the light of economic, social and political issues? If so then your essay looks excellent. Best of luck
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