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Old Sunday, December 24, 2017
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I read your outline only. As per my opinion your essay is irrelevant only no 5 is relevant. the essay says accountability is essential for Pakistan development. you have given detail/ types of accountability but not on how essential it is for Pakistan development. you should relate the accountability to Pakistan development.
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