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Originally Posted by thetiktik View Post
Hello,
You have made a great effort in writing this outline, but there are some shortcomings in it.
1. Try to make some heading more general.
2. Add other points, such as regional connectivity, economic development in the region, possible strengthening of social bonds.
3. Your entire outline is focused more on China and a few dimensions, such as China's rise, than anything else.
4. Connect Gawadar, Strait of Hormuz with economic implications for the region and the world.
Thank you for your response.

Well, on point 2, there literally was no direct regional connectivity or economic implication for the region per se back in February when I was writing this essay. I like your point that this essay is more focused on China.

Do you think this is a passable attempt?
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