Originally Posted by goldenravian

well just keep repeating the title and u will find more depth to it.

I see following way to present

Women in Family
Women in Society
Women in Entrepreneurship
Women in Jobs
Women in Politics
Women in Labour

Proper indenting and suboutlines add more depth.

Now the areas to comment are
Education
Empowerment/Liberty or participation in decisionmaking
Freedom both financial and career

Add references to status of women in Islam
comparison of women in first and third worlds

gradual awareness in female rights

Just keep relating parts of title in different combinations and u can add many dimensions.

feel free to get essay review as well.