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Old Friday, April 26, 2019
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Originally Posted by Maria The Chemist View Post
overall good effort but point #4 and its parts need some editing/altering not seems appropriate match of main topic
its my personal opinion
and on point #2 reference of john dewey .....hands up

your pass/fail depend on luck
I give you 47 marks on this.

tell me size of essay?
Please evaluate this one:

TOPIC: CLASSROOMS DECIDE THE FUTURE OF THE NATION:

OUTLINE:
1. Introduction
(i) Classrooms as representation of formal education
(ii) What is formal education?
(iii) Relationship between the future of the nation and the formal education

2. How Classrooms Decide the Future of the Nation

(i) Formal education imparts unity which is essential for prosperous future of nation
(ii) Economic progress of the nation depends on its formal education through classrooms
(iii) Scientific development as backbone for the bright future of nation is achievable through formal education through classrooms
(iv) Formal education imparts rational approach
(v) Classroom education decide the tolerance level of the nation which decides its future
(vi) Poverty percentage decides the future of the nation which depends on formal education
(vii) Political stability of the nation requires literate masses
(viii) Extremism in the nation depends on the performance of the educational institutes which decides the future of the nation
(ix) Formal education as weapon against social evils to ensure prosperous future of the nation
(x) Formal education decides the cultural outlook of the nation
(xi) Formal education through class room develops the counter-narrative during hybrid warfare

3. How to improve the formal education in Pakistan for its bright future
(i) Vibrant educational policy
(ii) Curb on plagiarism for higher education
(iii) Revision of the curriculum
(iv) Training of teachers
(v) Enhancing the educational budget

4. Conclusion
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