Hello Guys,
Please comment on my following outline for essay cited in the title:

INTRODUCTION:
Man has Done incredible things

A BETTER WORLD MADE BY MAN
- Increased communication
- Elegant transportation
- Medical Science Successes
- Endeavors For Peace
- Globalization
- Energy Marathon

Horrible Things by Man
- Nuclear Proliferation
- Advancement towards capitalism
- Industrialization on the peak
- Heinous Desire for Imperialism

Way Forward:
- Say NO to nuclear Proliferation
- A world For All, No Profiteering
- Environment Friendly Practices in Industries
- Preserving Environment

Conclusion



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