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Originally Posted by Aamish Bhatti View Post
the fourth estate = the fourth pillar of the state

Social dilemmas = social evils

Responsible to highlight = responsible for highlighting

'Responsible to' is used in different context.

Avoid vague references like an Indian news channel, a news anchor etc. Over use of commas and adverbial conjunctions is making the passage a bit redundant.

Hope it helps.

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Thanks for your kind suggestions. I will try to follow them.
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