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Originally Posted by Saba Arif View Post
I will suggest you to write short and simple sentences.
Starting sentence of Introduction should be simple.

The media, being the fourth pillar of state, is responsible to highlight/unveil/expose/ the social problems/evils of society. It is also responsible to eradicate the social evils/problems/issues of society. However, it has been failed to deliver its actual job. Few days ago, I came across to a news on an Indian news-channel where news-caster was glorifying the Indian soldiers for the inhuman acts perpetrated on innocent Kashmiris. News-person was condemning the innocent armless Kashmiris and labeling them as the militants. In fact this problem is not only restricted to the Indian media alone but also world media in general around the world. Media is prejudiced towards the Muslims.
Thanks for checking my passage again. This time i used precise sentences yet have done some mistakes. Hope to improve next time.
But i didnt understand your sentence 'it has been failed to deliver its actual job'. is it correct? i think it should be ' it has failed to deliver'
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