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Originally Posted by The dream of rain
Its good but lemme point out somethings i felt:
> the topic is about relationship of machines with humans. so there is not point to talk about "Science has given knowledge and capabilities to humans but they do not know how to use them properly." (Irrelevant)
> Use past tense. avoid present tense. (skim DOs and DONTs of precis)
>Keep it up. your doing good.
P.S. Criticism is welcomed
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Okay. Let make a precise of this paragraph so that I can see how you fix issues you highlighted in my precis.