View Single Post
  #31  
Old Sunday, June 30, 2019
Saba Arif Saba Arif is offline
Member
 
Join Date: May 2018
Location: Hyderabad
Posts: 84
Thanks: 10
Thanked 15 Times in 13 Posts
Saba Arif is on a distinguished road
Default Issues

Quote:
Originally Posted by Innocent Hafeez View Post
Labor makes man
Man’ accomplishments in his journey depend upon his strenuous struggle not upon his luck. Because, luck makes him lazy and depend on others. On the other hand, labor encourages him to work tirelessly for a free and an active life. (Words 40)
You have some issues in precis.
1- First your title is not completely suitable. Title should be "Labor not the luck, makes a man". (2.5/5 marks)
2- Total words are 126 so 1/3 should be 42 or 43. your words are 40. (2/3) marks.
3- you added some extra words such as "luck makes him lazy and depend on others". Laziness and self-dependence have not been mentioned in original paragraph. Therefore, you got (-2 Marks)
4- Your score from precis is 4/7
So your total score is (2.5/5+2/3-2+4/7=6.5/15 )
Reply With Quote