Main Points

1. Humans must realize that they will are liable to make mistakes to satisfy themselves.
2. Humans should consider difficulties as a part of universal struggle and face them courageously.
3. Desperation cannot address the situation.
4. Perhaps hug troubles to himself is a human’s greatest foolishness.
5. Getting guidance from a trusted friend can make worst worries smoother.
6. But humans have limited wisdom
7. Prayer and faith in a Higher Power can help us through our most anxious times and endure large evils.
8. Many people’s diseases and difficulties have vanished with faith in God and hard work
9. For example, Alexis Carrel faced criticism calmly and won Nobel Prize.
10. Our struggle would appear minor to us if we see it as a part of a whole creation.
11. It makes lives easier and increase collective human dignity and faith.
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1st Draft

Humans must realize their tendency to make mistake to be at peace with themselves and should consider difficulties as a part of universal struggle. They should face them courageously, as desperation cannot address the issues. Getting guidance form a trusted friend can ease worst worries. However, human have limited wisdom, so prayer and faith in a Higher Power can get people through their most anxious times. Many people’s problems got solved due to faith in God and hard work, like Alexis Carrel won Nobel Prize. Observing struggle as a part of a whole creation can make humans’ lives easier and enhance human dignity and faith.
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2nd Draft

Human should realize that they all make mistakes and face difficulties, which they should confront courageously because desperation cannot solve issues. A trusted friend’s guidance help ease frustration. However, as humans have limited wisdom, one should seek refuge in prayer and have faith in a Higher Power. Many people’s problems got solved due to faith in God and hard work. Moreover, considering struggles as a part in a holistic perspective can make human’s lives easier and enhance their dignity and faith.