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In the 9th century, those who were in the Army or Navy or had their birthright or had any family acquaintanceship could only be a part of the society and none other. Without invitation, if the latter would go somewhere, they would be discouraged. The middle class established their own society as their number and influence boosted. Moreover, they showed respect for poor societies. Odd behaviours and atheism were discouraged.