You have understood the comprehension well. And you've put it into words efficiently. However, avoid using single long sentences. Break your long sentence into two sentences. Your usage of 'agree to', 'author called' & 'Confucius thought' is incorrect. It is 'agree with', 'The author calls' & 'Confucius' thought or Confucius views/teachings' etc.

Also, a big indicator of a good comprehension attempt is to avoid copy pasting the expressions and words of the passage. Use alternative words and expressions. This is because the answers are worth 4 marks each and your personal input is required.

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Humein kya. Tumhein kya. Ap ko kya.