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Originally Posted by Innocent Hafeez View Post
Q: Discuss in detail the impact of British Advent in America.
To me, answer to this question can go longer if we have sufficient material in our mind to prove what we say.
My attempt to this question, please analyze it and correct me.
Your criticism is welcome
Outline
1. Introduction
Columbus expedition
Voyages
British advent
Colonies
2. Impact of British Advent in America.
Political impacts

Before advent: divided society
British organized them under one dominion
Steps for self-government
Economic impacts
New industries
Boosting agricultural sector
Discovery of tobacco by John Ralf
Introduction of tax culture
Socio-cultural impacts
British imperialism
Slavery
European/western culture and values
Diseases
Colonization of the land: race between Europe’s imperial forces
Religious impacts
Christianity and construction of Anglican churches
Technological impacts
New inventions
Example: Invention of Cotton Jin by Eli Whitney in 1793
Modern education
English language
British military introduced modern weapons
Impact on America’s geography
Before advent: a distant and unknown land
After advent: British connected it with world
Uninhabited lands brought under irrigation and settlement
Water valleys were diverted for canals and irrigation and deforestation for
settlement
Impact on American demography
Before advent: Land of Indians (sole group)
After advent: British people, Europeans, African-Americans (slaves),
persecuted religious minorities (Puritans)
Conclusion
A distant land
British advent and transformation
New developments: land of Indians became what we now call America.
Content is really good but Innocent Hafeez, i think, you need to rephrase certain sub-headings like,"European/western culture and values," "Impact on American demography
Before advent: Land of Indians (sole group)
After advent: British people, Europeans, African-Americans (slaves),
persecuted religious minorities (Puritans)"[/B]
You can rephrase like, introduction of new culture, inclusion of Britons and African-Americans, and mixed ones... And, more.

And,your heading "Steps for self-government" is bit contradictory to me, because the question asks about impacts caused by British advent in America. So your heading gives a sense that you are referring to self-govt. by natives, which is not the case by then and now. You can replace it by giving a better face.
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