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Old Tuesday, February 21, 2006
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Salam Mr. Naseer,

Realy good effort but your introduction is not impressing as it should be in an essay and again the end does not need to say that I have jotted down etc as if it is mentioned it will not have good impression on the examiner. Also try to expand the outline to as many points as possible,

In need of prays.

Sajid.
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