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Originally Posted by aishalam
Hello. I apologize for the late response. My cat passed away today so it has been draining. Anyway I'm glad you found my comments useful. I've addressed your comment in parts below;
It sincerely makes me happy that I could be of help. I'll try to get to the rest of the paragraphs one by one in the coming few days. There might be a little delay and I'm really sorry about that.
I have no issue with lumping this current pandemic with the ones that have gone before it. The use of "one of" in the context is perfectly valid. My only gripe with the referred passage was the use of the word "rarest". Rare by definition means unusual or singular. So going on that the Covid-19 pandemic is not particularly unique. It has it's unique set of challenges of course but as an event several similar (and sometimes worse) ones have gone before and I doubt if this will be the last. So change the word "rarest". A few suggestions; "one of the most consequential occurance of our times/ one of the most monumental events of the modern era/ one of the most pivotal moments in recent history" you know something along this line. I've also added words like "our times/modern era/recent history" to ground the current Pandemic in a time frame and context but you could chose not to add those on.
I'll definitely try to get to the rest asap. Feel free to ask any questions which come to your mind along the way. I hope that it's a useful exercise for the both of us and we learn something along the way.
Best regards
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1. First and foremost, please accept my condolences for the passing away of your cat. May you get its replacement soon!
2. I am impressed the way you thoroughly and critically analyse my writings. For instance, you highlighted spelling mistakes, appropriate usages, factually if valid or otherwise argument, etc. To put it in other words, its like 360 analysis of writ-ups.
3. Though i have not attended any academy for preparation, but taken demos, i came to the realisation that joining academy will be of no use to me. I am learning more from this forum than i could have learnt from academies. To substantiate, guidance of the seniors from this forum like you.
4. Have you taken Css? I have appeared in CSS 2020. I did appear in PCS (Sindh) 2018 failed in Essay. Reappeared in PCS again 2019 waiting for result. Will be appearing again in PCS 2020 to be hold after the normalisation of lockdown/pandemic.
5. I hope you will continue helping me like checking my write-ups and providing guidance accordingly.