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Originally Posted by bakhtawar sikander ali
yeah, it is a good outline but I think that you should add names of renewable and non renewable resources and the GDP too, as it will cause a brilliant effect on your essay outline.
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But maybe then an essay will become more technical , it will be like solving EDS or environmental science paper . She has used some technical words in her outline but filling an outline with more words like those may have a negative effect . One can use detailed information in an essay .
There is other side of this view too , as you said , that she can give names of renewable and non renewable resources , but it would be better to just write a point of renewable and non renewable resources and then explain about them in the body of essay .