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Old Saturday, February 20, 2021
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Shahzad, nice effort but I personally think that is has a lot of redundancy , in that, you have repeated some statements towards the end.

This has reminded me of "tere mast mast do nain, mere dil ka lay gaey chain
mere dil ka lay gaey chain tere mast mast do nain"

LOL.
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