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Title: Nizar Hasan and his pro-Palestinian documentaries

Nizar Hasan, a Palestinian filmmaker, was born in Mushahd. In 1994, he produced Independence that denounced Israel's notion of independence by claiming it an act of land grabbing. Amidst the heavy coverages of news of Israeel's annexation plan; Nizar emailed the author and sent him the link of his(Nizar) new documentary, My Grandfather's Path. It is a pro-Palestinian movie showing Zionists ambitions of mind trapping, Palestinian's despondence, and the world's silence over Israeel's annexation plans. The auther first of all thanks international media coverge to help him escape from Zionist trap and then praises the documentary because of its impressiveness. He, finally, suggests watching this movie by saying that undoutedly film is long but it must be watched without interuption.
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