@KinzKhan

On a lighter note, I couldn't understand how did you muster up so much info about the topic, and how would you put all these ideas in the essay in a given time while justifying each of the issues you have raised in the outline?

Anyhow, I would suggest that the essay outline shouldn't be jumbled up, one should try a mock exercise by writing the outline and essay in a given time constraint and then see how s(he) was able to get so many things in an essay while justifying the outlines use in the essay. Always remember the time constraint and don't overdo things.