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Originally Posted by zbaloch_204
I choose to write essay on food crises:problems,challanges and opportunities for Pakistan.I feel that i should not have attempted it as there were other good topics available.anyway my outline was:
1.Introduction
2.The crises
3.Reasons:
3.1 Low per acre yield
3.2 Middleman
3.3 smuggling and hoarding
3.3 post harvest losses
4.Problems:
4.1 Farmer's end:
4.1.1 Lack of technical know how
4.1.2 traditional means of farming
4.2 Institutional Level:
4.2.1 absence of quality seeds
4.2.2 non conservation of water
4.2.3 Lack of Infrastructure
5. Opportunities
5.1 increasing per acre yield
5.2 broadening research base and
5.3 educating farmers
5.4 introducing modern means of cultivation
5.5 reducing post harvest losses
5.6 exporting the surplus after maintaining strategic buffer stock
6.conclusion
(linked it to importance of agriculture in view of threat from bio fuel).
Please comment on the outline as i am really worried over my essay.
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Topic was not bad. It was good decision to write on this topic at least it was free from controversiality and was lesser risky.
As for as the outline is concerned it is to the point outline, nothing is irrelevant in the outline. One shortcoming which I have noted is non inclusion of remaining relevant points. This outline could be extended more because we have lot of other relevant points available to include in it to make it more interesting and scoring.
Regards