Thread: Seniors and qualifiers plz comment upon my Essay
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Old Monday, September 21, 2009
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Your effort is good and also wording and sentence structure is good, Your essay can fetch passing marks in exam. Almas ruby suggestion is reasonable, needs something unique from others.
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