good attempt just missing a few things, Intro could have been better like defining the objective resolution.
You could start like this After the independence of Pakistan, the first hurdle was the formation of its own constitution !! then you could write what objective resolution is bla bla

Main thing which you are missing is the Critical Analysis. What did you understand from this resolution. You just jotted down the main points of the resolution but you have to give your own analysis on it. Overall nice attempt i would still give you 5.5/10

Regards

waqarj