I am a student here myself, and junior.. I am also learning techniques of precis so cant really comment. However, there are some grammatical mistakes in ure precis which I have pointed out.
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Originally Posted by Soomro786
Dimension of Art
Art is a style of expressing opinion(s), suggestions and views. The limits (s is additional) of artist is to express his emotions to communicate effectively rather manipulating our mind(s) to change opinion over subjects. So, it is baseless to blame art for bringing dismay in(to, not in) our life(lives). Artists like Pluto, Tolstoi, Shakespeare and other(s) (were) merely responsible for the expression of modus operandi of their characters. It is we, who read between the lines according to our capabilities. Artists never became cause of erecting theories like atheist(???). However, they are expressing their passion in distinct dimension(s). They only gave (give) us (a) way to think, it is we who shape the final products as atheistic (aesthetic) theories.
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I would still like a senior to comment on ure as well as my precis.