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Originally Posted by out of place
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House of commons is only place where absurdity of man is so evident. It is full of self-centered politicians with great penchant for outward show but nothing of inner substance and mutual respect. As soon as you start to address the house, even the best of colleagues doesn’t fail to disrespect you by staging a walk out. And even if any person does hold onto everything that one says, it is not out of his interest in the speech but because he intends to speak right after. Everyone is only interested in promoting one’s own name and importance. (99 words)
Can the title be: Vanity at work
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nice attempt, always try to write your prcise in third person, don't make a kichri of 'I' 'you' and 'he'. instead write by pointing out 'politicians' do this politician do that.........so and so forth.
try to rewrite precise keeping this role in your mind.
thanks
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Last edited by Andrew Dufresne; Monday, January 18, 2010 at 12:11 AM.
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