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Old Tuesday, February 09, 2010
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Originally Posted by sasas098 View Post

TITLE: Man's Future Masters
your extraction of gest is good, and there is coherence in you precis which is good for a good attempt.

however, just to ask, will it not be more convincing in its tone, if we write it in third person. I read somewhere about this rule.
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