@najeebrb
aoa i couldn t read ur essay coz f shortage of time,but tried to give thorough look to ur outline.
ur outline is good,detailed.but there are two things u should work on:
a- ur topic is Extremism n Talibanization,since talibans refer to external elements too,so try to adopt a holistic approach n do discuss other regions of the world too where they are present
b- ur suggestions do not at all allude to the talibanisation.u have done well w/ reference to th extremism but left talibanisation untouched...
i hope that would be helpful
regards

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