Very well written, excellent use of grammar and the facts. Good job.
I pointed out a few changes, check them out plus something i noted was "right" and "right" try to change the right/wrong Right to something else, doesn't sound so good to me for your call.
Change "thing" to "something"
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The right to a something must only be put into effect when its auspiciousness is ensured.
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Instead of "in the same" you could use "Likewise". Try to rewrite the sentence to avoid using "thing". Doesn't sound so good, dont you think?
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Likewise, one’s prerogative to a certain [thing] does not....
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Instead of using "right" the second time in the same sentence even though the meaning is different, try using "accurate, ethical, proper, precise".
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The exercising of a right can be [right] as long as it...
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"Wrong" It doesn't sound too bad here but see what you can do with it.
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The right becomes wrong when it does not bring positive results. It also becomes wrong when
"whether or not it is [accurate]"
whether or not it is right to exercise a right that
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State is an entity which derives itsauthority from its people.
"and let the state secure...
Thus, the state gets the...
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