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Originally Posted by rishzzz
I appreciate your expression is good, hardly grmr mistks. But follow the essence of CSS essay. and dont take just political point of view. You just took that. You must have explained economic and social impact in it as well.
You can improve alot you have potential.
Regards
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I am grateful to you for scanning my essay and giving useful suggestions. I will ensure that the shortcomings are minimized in my next essay.
One thing that I am curious to know is whether the examples mentioned in the essay qualify to be called valid examples and whether they are in compliance with the theme of essay. That is to say I want to know if you find any irrelevancy in the content if any. If so, please take time in identifying those. I will be further obliged.