Originally Posted by wahab_ahqar

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Careless Person is nausea not only to him, but also to the society and the state.


Man is social animal therefore he has certain responsibilities in the society. Man is born with two types of obligations; the one he owes to Allah and the others he owes to people (It would have been more better,if u had written the only obligation of the man that he owes to people; As some men do not believe in the existence of Allah; Atheists.And here u have pointed out man. so be generalized..man has obligations that he owes to people living around him). What a person does, not only impacts his life but also the life of people around him. (Correct: Actions of the man imapct not only on his life but also on that of the other people living around him ).
(New paragraph)in addition,This world is an open forum for everyone. He(Say:man first.then, proceed with HE) who works diligently, (he)(Understood.so don't write He) can earn a better role and position in this world and hereafter(Brother, do not put the life of hereafter; be realistic). The one who evades his responsibility(duties can be used as an alternative) fails here and will fail hereafter(Again u have compared the present life with that of hereafter). In addition to personal growth and reward,there are certain responsibilities that he has in the society and he has to fulfill these obligations(do not inflict upon man the duty of fulfiling any responsibility.However, you can write as : he fulfills those obligations), whether he wishes or not,(unnecessary) for the development of the society. It will not be possible to develop a society and improve the quality of life of its inhabitants first and then realization of these(those) responsibilities and taking things head on which hinder the progress and development.(in fact whole sentence conveys three ideas.it would be better if u had written these ideas in separate sentences) besides,Only responsible person can care of this thing(such matters) and can make this earth a better living place.
on the contrary,Carelessness is one major hurdle in the development of any society. Careless persons become a burden on their fellow citizens. The(no article is required here) other people will have to work more to compensate his(their) negligence and will have to make tough for them to earn a place in the comity of developed societies.
summing up,The impact depends upon the role one has to play in the society; the results of the carelessness of the head of the state and a common man cannot be the same. Being the basic(building blocks is enough) building blocks of the society, the failure of the individuals ultimately leads to the failure of the societies.