Thread: Plz critically evaluate this expansion
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Old Sunday, December 12, 2010
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Originally Posted by Eager View Post
Itni saari mistakes...mjhay to laga tha main ne bohat achhi expansion likhi hai okay main dobara likhti hoon lekin ye vocabulary ka kya problem hai mjhay samjh nahi aya. vocab suitable nahi hai ya kya. heap of vocab matlab zada kese hai?? unfamiliar words hain?? or ghalat vocab use ki hai???
over use hai .acha likho per itna over use na kro vocabulary ka .And ther are wrong use of vocabulary too as pelf is mostly used in negative sense. The more you make it complex the more will be the chances of error.
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