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Originally Posted by Maroof Hussain Chishty View Post
What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truely independent state?

Outline

1. Introduction
  • Main points of the stability of a state
  • Good Governance
  • Loyalty of leaders to the nation
  • Democracy
  • Independent Judiciary
  • Foreign Policy
  • Interior policies, planing and legislature
  • Power resources, there best use


2. Hurdles
  • Our economical situation on the day of our independence
  • Migration
  • Division of assets between India and Pakistan
  • Martial laws and economy
  • wars and our economy
  • energy crisis nd it impact on our economy
  • War on terror and its impact on our economy and national sovereignity
  • Loss of 4o billion
  • Politics in Pakistan
  • Corruption, Malpractice
  • provincial prejudice
  • Mismanagement of natural resources
  • Debts and Loans
  • Price hiking due to our crippling economy
  • Dissaster, floods, earthquacks
  • Another Dhaka situation in Balochistan
  • Bad policies and bad politics


3. How to be an independent State?
  • To revive our foreign policy
  • to review of our ties with other countries (usa)
  • Central Asian countries and Pakistan
  • Pakistan, Inda Afghanistan relations
  • Pakistan, Iran, India relations and gas pipeline
  • Gawader port and its use by CA countries and in reward we can get petrolium and gas
  • International debt and Pakistan
  • Good governance
  • strict punishments for such actions which are harmful for whole nation(corruption)
  • NFC Award
  • truely managment and use of our natural resources (thar coal)
  • Back industries to make a rapid change nd progress in overall economical situation
  • Steps to the betterment of Law and order
  • Mature legislature
  • Independent Judiciary
  • Loyal Adminstration
  • Acknowlegment of people to back country by saving natural resources through media
  • Conclusion
  • "God helps those who help themselves"
Chishty sab
though u haven't asked for the comments, but i think i can guide a little bit. Ur effort is commendable and reflect wide knowledge but i think u focused less on the essay. It was quite simple and direct. 80% of your papers should have comprised the hurdles. But u unnecessarily went for other things. Remaining 20% should have consisted the introduction, conclusion, relevant quotations and references. this is my assessment. However, i wish u good luck.
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