Thursday, March 24, 2011
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Originally Posted by sibgakhan
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Tashreeh:
ghazal k pehlay misray mein shayir apnay mehboob ki husn ko sarah raha hai.wo ekhta hai k chand youn chamak raha hai jesay tumhara sabeeh chehra chamakta hai.shaiyir ko chand mein mehboob ki jhalak nazer aati hai.chand ko mehboob se tashbeeh dena shaiyiron ki khaas riwayat hai mager Faiz yahan bhi infradiyat ka rang liye hue nazer aatay hain.Shaiyri kehta hai mosam khushgawaar aur faza ki mehkaar ne meray mehboob,meray hamraaz k roop ko b sanwara hai.Baqol Aatish;
wo shab thi k k thi roshni jis mein din ki,
zameen per se ik noor taa aasman tha,
nikalay thay do chand us ne muqabil,
wo shab subah e jannat ka jis pe gumaa'n tha.
doosray shair mein shaiyir kehta hai k meri aankh mein jo mehboob k sabeeh chehray ka aks nazer aa raha hai us se lgta hai k mera mehboob kuch herani ka shikaar hai.goya shaiyir ka mehboob masoom husn rakhta hai ye he waja hai k bhola pan aur herani us k chehray se hawaida hai.Phir shaiyir apnay mehboob k labon ki tareef kerta hai. baqol Meer;
Nazuki us k lab ki kia kahye,
pankhrri ik gulaab ki si hai
shayir kehta hai k anaar ki manind surkh labon mein teri aawaz ka tarranum uljha hua hai.aisa maloom hota hai k shaiyir ko apnay samnay paa k mehboob sherm o haya ka mujasma ban gaya hai aur us k chehray pe herani bhi hai aur aawaz ghabrai hui hai.
teesray shair mein shaiyir mehboob se wisaal ki tamanna kerta hai.wo kehta hai mein ne sharab ko hath nae lagaya mager mein tumharay husn o shabab se khud ko madhosh kerna chahta hun.ager tum mujh pe ye anayat karo tou is shab k baad jo subah aye gi wo meray lye aisay he ho gi jesay mein nashay mein choor hun.aur youn tumhari dilkashi aur subah ka ujala meray liye inbisaat ka baa'is ho ga.Baqol Ghalib;
نشّہ*ہا شادابِ رنگ و ساز*ہا مستِ طرب
شیشۂ مے سروِ سبزِ جوئبارِ نغمہ ہے
ہم نشیں مت کہ کہ برہم کر نہ بزمِ عیشِ دوست
واں تو میرے نالے کو بھی اعتبارِ نغمہ ہے
chothay shair mein shaiyir chang(baja) aur laey ko apnay dil se tashbeeh deta hai k dil ka saaz lahu k dam se rawaan hai.yahan shaiyir ye kehna chahta hai k;
"dil ka mosam acha ho tou saray mosam achay lagtay hain".
Shaiyir mehboob k wisaal k nashay mein makhmoor hai.ye he waja hai k us k dil ki dharrkan ki laey usay bohat khushgawaar lag rahi hai.
aakhri shair mein shaiyir mehboob se darkhwast kerta hai k wo phir koi baat karay ta k us k labon se adaa honay walay lafz fazaa mein naghmay chairr den..aisa maloom hota hai k shaiyir ka mehboob bohat kam'shukhan hain,ye he waja hai k wo us ki aawaz sun'nay ko be'taab hai.
meray jaan o dil meray ham safar,
koi baat ker, koi baat ker
teray lab hilen tou katay safar,
koi baat ker,koi baat ker
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