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Originally Posted by Farrah Zafar View Post
[SIZE="4"][FONT="Comic Sans MS"]My poetic fellows here I'm going to share my own poetry.Wazan ki zamanat mein nahi deti.bas likh leti hun jab "aamad" hoti hai
After doing Css,I will pay heed to my poetic work,Islah karva k shayed Book b print karwaun gi ..ager ap khareednay ka waada karen

ap mein se b koi ager apni intehai Zaati shayiri share kerna chahay tou ye thread hazir hai.

NOTE:All rights are reserved.If you want to share my any piece of poetry,share it with my name werna Allah poochay
Your attempt is not so bad.. Infact, it was good...
I am also ready to buy your book...
Keep trying & sharing...
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Originally Posted by Eager View Post
thanks farah, group me apni poetry share krtay hue i was having the feeling kay sirf 2,3 log hi hmaray is "besh baha" talent se aashna ho pa rahay hain baaqi forum members ko tou pata hi nahi kay yahan kesay kesay ahl-e-qalam mojoud hain tou phir ek nazm hazir-e-khidmat hai. All rights reserved, churanay ki koshish na ki jae plz touseef-o-tanqeed ka haq behar haal sb ko hasil hai
Shuker hai keh mujhay yahan ahl-e-qalam logon ka pata chal gaya,,

waisay poetry of both is good,,,, You must continue....
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