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Remember that I m a jonior member. I will try to make u understand.
First of all concentrate upon the heading. And the outlines must follow the heading/topic. Here u mentioned
1 causes of low standard of education
2 rising poverty
3 unemployment
i think these points lead u against ur topic.
Here u can add the development of japan through education.
A little no of educated Palestine stpped israel's army to enter into gaza in 2009 and made underground ways to help their companians.
U wrote that "it turns hurdles into opportunities" here u must give arguments to prove ur statement.
its my point of view, May others opinion vary from it
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