Well Roshan before I say something, lemme tell you ke I havn´t started my Essay preparation yet and I know nothing about writing frankly ;-)
But the fact that you are quite an active member here (I have actually found some of your posts worth while and have benefitted from them) and nobody replied you in a week time moved me, and here I am telling you my very humble opinion
Agar yahi essay topic ho to what I get from it is ke ¨the examiner expects us to
prove that the progress really lies in the hands of youth¨ OR ¨
how youth can bring progress to the country¨and keeping this thing in mind, dont you think that you are slightly off the track?? Look you told us very beautifully ke bhae ye masaail hain ya ye roles and responsibilities hain youth ki and you also gave the suggestions at the end but your essay fits more under the topic : Problems faced by the youth and how to make good use of youth.. hmm something like that :/
Remember, this is MY opinion and I might be wrong, don´t get dishearted