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Originally Posted by mariashamshad
there was just lack of facts and figures that i told u and the remaining essay and its language was good.it was better from your previous essay attempts.carry on roshan.you improved alot in this essay but again i didn't find even a single quote in your essay
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thnx alot maria for ur appreciation and encouraging words so nice of u
keep guiding me so that i cud improve more as far as essay writing is concerned and grab gud marks in upcuming xams...
ya i realize dat there is lack of facts and figures and quotations in my essay, i'll surely add sum in my cuming essays