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Women Empowerment
Outline:
• Introduction;
o Definition and Concepts.

• Importance of Womens Role in Society.
o Worldly perspective
o National perspective (rural and urban society)

• Problems of women
o Deprived from basic rights.
o Male dominating Society; Dependence on men.
o Lack of freedom.
o Social abuse, and voilence.

• Women’s empowerment and its importance.
o Working side by side with men, support their families and sharing equal burden.
o Impact of women empowerment on national issues like poverty, economic growth, politics, planning and policy making.
o Their role in nation building

• How women’s empowerment can be achieved.
o Islamic teaching, examples from histroy about muslim and non-muslim powerful womens.
o Quaid’s teachings.
o Benazir’s own character and personality.
o Changing the overall mind-set of people.
o Women education.
o Realization and protection of their rights.
o Freedom to think, speak and act.
o Efficient Legal and justice system to protect their rights, and prevent any act of abuse and voilence against them.
o Media’s role in promoting Gender Equility and education of common people about importance of women in any society.
o Equal oppurtunities.
o Engagment in different community services through micro-finance schemes, and Non-Governmental Organizations working for rural and social development.
o Women’s responsibilities.

• Conclusion.