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Originally Posted by Tauseef Taj Kiani
Please evaluate and comment, it was my first outline :-(
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Dear outline of your essay is quite fine. But you need improvement as Syeda Sabahat has said earlier.
In my Opinion, also show examples from Pre-Islamic era and then compare it with Islamic teachings. Try to give quotes from Quran and Hadith. Also give examples of famous Muslim Women like Hazrat Khadija (R.A), Hazrat Ayesha (R.A), etc.
Also put light on current situation of Women in Muslim World especially in Pakistan. Then compare it with Western World.