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Old Wednesday, July 20, 2011
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1) first of all don’t write these type of sentences like “let,s discuss some of the causes.essey is not a discussion so just write the causes of….whatever causes are goin to write.
2)when u start your heading “population explosion and Pakistan, then start it from economy of Pakistan and it growing population.and also population k lehaz se kis number pe ha Pakistan in worldwide and in asia and in Islamic countries…
3)this is a topic which is related to facts and figures so essay is lack of that.
4)then its lack of future projection regarding population
5) add role of population council of Pakistan also .
the inside material like causes and impacts are very good and introduction also.but the above points need to be focus in my opinion.essey was little short also.
I will post mine essay or some material on this topic that will help you hopefully.
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