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Old Wednesday, December 13, 2006
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Salam,
It's nice to be here in CSS forum. Miss Naqvi has comprehensively described a hot topic. I appreciate her efforts, but I would also like to bring her attention in some of her grammatical mistakes, which she had made in it. First of all, she had excessively used "viceregal", which made her essay verbigerate. Secondly, consider this "....The feudal landlords of West Pakistan had no experiencing in governing a modern state and....." and also this one "...Another development of the 1958 military coup d’état was that it created a symbiotic relationship between the military and civil service, which would determine the future of Pakistani politics..", what does "WHICH" refer to in the above sentence.

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