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Old Wednesday, August 24, 2011
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Originally Posted by Farrah Zafar View Post


روشن بہت ہی اچھی کوشش ہے ۔جذبات کی بے ساختگی بلا شبہ دل کو چھو گئ ۔لیکن قافیہ نہیں آپ کی شاعری میں ۔
میں نے دوسرے تھریڈ میں آپ کی تشویش پڑھی ہے

آپ کی شاعری کو ویب سائٹ پہ شائع کرانے کا موقع دیا جائے گا ۔میں نے آپ کو پتا ای میل کر دیا ہے۔اور ہمیں فیس بک پر بھی جوائن کریں ۔ایک با ذوق ساتھی کو دیکھ کے بہت خوشی ہو گی

Thnx Alot Dear Farah for ur kind appreciation

Ya dear i am aware dat my poetry lacks the requirements and charateristics of complete poetry.

Farah these are just my feelings that i have put into words regardless of wazan, qafaiya or anything else that is required for making peotry..

Hope these words containing my feelings wud be liked by u and others who hav such sensitive feelings.....

Ya dear i hav got ur mail, thnx for inviting me to ur group...it wud be a great pleasure to join u......be in touch.....Regards
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Farrah Zafar (Wednesday, August 24, 2011)