well reading through out
i see one consistent problem and that is english
my uncle's friend passed the CSS exam. i was told he ACED it meaning he was one of the very top candidates
i just want to share this with you that HE COMPLETED THE DICTIONARY 3 OR 4 TIMES
i mean he read and knew most of the words in there and his english is very well
if u r a person who's not used to english much you should consider the dictionary your friend and INSHALLAH ALLAH will reward you
DONT GET DISHEARTED because that is the problem with us we give up easy.. if we try i know pakistani's have the heart and brain to be on top of the world not just pakistan itself

i hope this helps for next year
:$ make dua for me place
salam
qasim ali